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mATW
im goin by ur first 2 verses...structure is decent...flow falls off a little bit...no multis...wack wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...
GangsStarShit
structure is good..flow is on target...no multis...wordplay is decent...some of ur punches connected...personals were decent...
Overall
neither had multis...GangsStarShit had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...GangsStarShit gets my vote for the better verse...
VOTE - GANGSSTARSHIT
PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx...
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