KroNuz
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...structure was good...flow was on target...u had one multi...punch/personal connected pretty nicely...

intensity effect
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...structure was good...flow was on target...no multis...pacer and space bar dont rhyme...punch was decent...

Overall
both had a good structure...both had a stable flow...KroNuz had one more multi...and his punch/personal combination connected more then intensity effect's lone punch...so basing off of that...KroNuz gets my vote...

VOTE - KRONUZ

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx...