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Old 07-27-04, 03:19 PM   #7
KroNuz
 
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Break Down I
Myster E.- Yea You Started Out Good, But Towards The End You Fell Off, Flow Was On Point, Structure Was Eh.. You Needa Fix That.. Punches Were Here And There... They Ok.. Overal Ok Verse Not As Good As Ya Last One I Peeped..


$ik- Structure Was Good, Flow Was Decent, Wordplay Was Alright, The Multi Line Was Good, And Punches Hit... Overal Good Verse


Break Down II
Punches- Sik
Personals- Myster E.
Flow- Myster E.
Wordplay- Sik
Multis- Sik
Metaphors- Myster E.
Structure- Sik
Originality- Niether
Vocab- Tie

Final Vote- Sik

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