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aight this was a close battle a very close battle
V.A
you had a nice verse and you had good wordplay but you need 2 chop all that shit down you put in way 2 many words and you need 2 use some complexity and elevate some u can work on ya structure 2
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You had a nice drop 2 ya structure was kinda diff but it got the job done i liked ya wordplay and u had some nice meta's and ya punches were hittin alot harder than ya comp
nice battle 4rm both of ya but my vote go 2
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