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Old 07-27-04, 04:21 PM   #5
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This is what I like seein a fuckin ill verse man/
Wordplay and multis were on point, helpin you make the flow good/
Good imagery in the verse too man, that was a very ill piece/
There isnt much you have to work on/
You got wordplay,multis, flow, and structure down/
Coulda been longer, I give it a 9/10 man/
Keep elevatin/
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