uuh well. first of all, you second line was bit off 8 mile.

8 mile seems to have a big impact on Newish lyrics.

-you need to work on puttn multis in your verse, get some real personals. punches werent landing, you had a calm structure which isnt bad, but make your verse a little more creative and youll get some votes, but elevate more and come bac. (denied)


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