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Old 07-27-04, 05:01 PM   #16
~Luciano~
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ya verse would of been alot hotter if u hadent of put the damn{} around ya hits
it made the whole flow fucked up it was an ok drop but dont put that on there
ya drop didnt have much wordplay and complexity like u jus threw ya words 2gether

Revoke
overall you had the better drop here, you good wordplay ya punches hit but they
were kinda simple you can elevate a lil bit and make ya punches more complicated
and then u will be straight you had good complexity tho and overall jus a better drop

my vote~~~~~~~~Revoke~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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