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Old 07-27-04, 05:19 PM   #11
AF-RICAN ROYALE
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Originally Posted by BostonLyricist
bitch i didnt challenge you,ya stepped to the crop and the cream//

..NOPE DONT TALK BOUT YOSELF..WHO YOU BATTLING/..FOCUS ON YO OPP.

get that ass stomped out like kane did dat boi now what Ameen//
put my mic to your heart like a stethascope//
my lyrical indimidation have you breathin like john q's son like he doin the breath stroke//

..ATTEMPT AT WORDPLAY BUT YOUR STILL TALKIN BOUT YOSELF AN NOT FOCUSING ON YO OPP.

ya came to this challenge son totally un prepared//
thoughy you was well aware my blazin ryhmes have bones naked and bare//

..NOPE..THOUGHT YOU WERE GOING SOMEWHERE WITH THE FIRST LINE BUT NAH..

i move niccah losely,opponnents im non chosee,im hot like a lava jacusie//
seein ya post give me more laughs then white folk watchin i love lucy//

FUCK LANGUAGE YOU SPEAKING HERE?..AN THE SECOND LINE WAS A GAY ASS PUNCH IF THAT..

my bars will lite ya up like time square at new years//
serve you shot after shot like a seasonal finale of cheers//

..TALKIN BOUT SHOOTING HIM?...YOU LIVE THAT NEAR HIM AN KNOW HIM?...SHITS JUST THEARTING AN TALKIN SHIT..NOTHING

fuck it ima stay on the sitcoms and drop bombs through my text//
your a virgin kidd you all city and no sex// (sex in the city)

...LAST LINE COULDVE BEEN WORDED BETTA BUT IT WAS STILL A LIL SLAP

this is fear factor youngin your greatest test//
you have to suckyour mom dick while feelin on your pops brest//
or just give it up like usher and say i cant win and confess//

..NOTHING HERE...SORRY

it was ight ive seen better from me...vote it up



IGHT I GIVE YO SHIT BOUT A 2.5/10..ONLY CAUSE YOU HAD HALF A SLAP AN A GAY PUNCH ...YALL NEED TO ELEVATE AN FOCUS MORE ON YO OPP...DONT NO ONE WANNA HEAR BOUT YOU..THATS WHAY OPEN MIC IS FOR...YOUR BATTLING YOUR OPP. SO HE SHOULD HE THE CENTER OF YO RHYMES AN DISSES..DONT GIVE YO SELF PROPS WHEN YOUR SUPPOSED TO BE DISSING HIM...WASTE OF LINES... YALL CAN RHYME THATS A GOOD START..NOW JUST NEED SOME ELEVATION..

MY VOTE = BOSTAN..