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Old 07-27-04, 05:25 PM   #12
The Black Plague
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Aight, pretty good battle ya'll, but i think Mim takes it with better personals, and hard hittin punches...

Hot- Not a bad verse, you had some decent punches, but you really fell off towards the end. Some of ya lines didn't make sense, like the wizards and warlocks, and it didn't rhyme. You can come with better personals, cuz he explained everyone, and your punches coul've been better. You need a new struc, cuz your struc took away from your flow. Not bad tho...

Mim- Nice verse, you really had some nice personals, really dissed him well. Some nice punches in there, and your struc was nice which made you flow nicely. Your last couple lines were kinda weak, and i didn't really get the bronx line you had, it didn't make sense. But you had an overall much better verse, and your personals killed him easily, so you get my vote.

V/ Mim
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