DJulien
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...wordplay is decent...a few, at best, of ur punches connected...no good personals...

tourn
structure is ok...some of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a little...no multis...wordplay was ok...some of ur punches connected...good personals...

Overall
DJulien had the better structure...and the more stable flow...neither had multis...both had ok wordplay...tourn had more connecting punches...and better personals...and punches and personals r more important then structure and flow...so basing off of that...tourn gets my vote...

VOTE - TOURN

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx...