LyricalOnslaught
structure is good...no multis...played punch that didnt connect, as it was also a meta...

intensity effect
structure was good...no multis...punch was semi-original...didnt connect though...

Overall
both had a good structure...neither had multis...neither punch connected...LyricalOnslaught had a played punch, and intensity effect's punch was semi-original, so basing off of that...intensity effect gets my vote for bein a little more original...

VOTE - INTENSITY EFFECTa

PLEAE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx...