Ice Pick
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure was good...flow was on target...u had tight multis...wordplay was pretty nice...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Durmil
structure is good...flow is on target...a few multis...wordplay was good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Ice Pick had more multis...both had a good structure...both had a good flow...neither had good personals...Durmil had better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Durmil gets my vote...

VOTE - DURMIL

PLEAE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx...