J_Trooper
structure was ok...ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a little due to the stretchnes...u had tight multis...wordplay was also tight...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Ghost354
structure is alright...u werent very consistent with ur line lengths though...flow fell off a little due to the lack of consistency...u had some multis...wordplay was decent...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had an ok structure...both flows' fell off a little...neither had any punches connecting...neither had good personals...J_Trooper had more, and better multis..as well as better wordplay...so basing off of that...J_Trooper gets my vote..

VOTE - J_TROOPER

PLEAE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx...