a leak, mouth droolin's a hoax?..

...him just spittin's a joke.

why you need 30 minutes to post?..

...when your just gonna follow up with prewritten votes.

the frist line was preety good decent flow and decent set up,
but u'r 2ed line made no sense to me??
pre-written votes??? how u have prewritten votes?? so the punch aint really make sense or do much for me... so the creativeness lacked basicly in other words...

3.5

poor bitch..havin high dollar hopes..but her skills spent
cause i'm stompin bruises on her frame, so she'll really rep blue-print

now this was better the hit was understandable and better more hard hitting in my eyes and was more creative and also a personal....
7.5

vote: tourn