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Old 07-27-04, 10:06 PM   #16
GunzGalore
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From: Wide-Awake-Wilson
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VA: nice flow...good structure, good personals and a decent wordplay. Could of had a betta opening but its st8 cuzz u had a nice ending. Plus u had some solid punches

Kronuz: Many stretched lines, no good structure at all. U need to fet in a betta flow and find a rhyme scheme.But u did have some aiight punches and some good multis.

Vote goes 2........VA

Keep at it my niggs
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