VA: nice flow...good structure, good personals and a decent wordplay. Could of had a betta opening but its st8 cuzz u had a nice ending. Plus u had some solid punches
Kronuz: Many stretched lines, no good structure at all. U need to fet in a betta flow and find a rhyme scheme.But u did have some aiight punches and some good multis.
Vote goes 2........VA
Keep at it my niggs
return da fav....
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