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Old 07-27-04, 11:26 PM   #38
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Originally Posted by GunzGalore
Datruth: Nice wordplay, good structure and flow. Hittin punches and st8 multi's. Could of had a better opener. I've been tryin to figure out what oven do u have for him to run into. Im not diggin dat line. Ok ending and overall a decent verse.

hit my battle up....http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137344




coz you're an idiot that doesn't get punchlines.. the gingerbread man, ended up getting baked in an oven.. dummy