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mATW
structure isnt very consistent...u started out with short lines...then went to long lines...flow fell off due to the lack of consistency...no multis...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...
XxXstasy
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay wasnt good...some of ur punches connected...decent personals....
Overall
neither had good wordplay...XxXstasy had the better structure...the more stable flow...more multis...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that..XxXstasy gets my vote...
VOTE - XXXSTASY
PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on thfirst link in my sig against hotshh!...thanx...
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