ok black dragon dog lemme give u some advice man...

you got potential iight... u remind me of me a few weeks ago but u got to get a better beat. i kno dat was a dre one but it was more of a freestyling beat. you need to turn yo voice down. your voice is a bit one turn and u sound like u arent pumped... get pumped dog!!! like nas before he dropped ether then it'll be tight. drop the gun talk and get some funny punches in there and it will be tight, good job pm me in you need any more help

delinqent - why post the fuckin lyrics? yo shit was clear anyway, nice multis u need a bit more emotion nice voice overs and effects n shit but yo punches and delivery won this for u

vote deliquent

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