Not too shabby ..could have been more lines since this was a diss...if u gonna do a short verse just make sure every single line u put out there is hard hitting ..because with a longer verse you could have had the lines u had and then added the harder hitting ones..some of ya lines was funny and some of em just decent...i dont see anything wrong with structure of ya bars this is text write em how ever u want to write the bars just as long as they fit together right.