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Old 07-28-04, 11:56 AM   #10
Mad Dog
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This was feedback posted for ...Superior...

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This verse got it in my opinion...the stucture was better & also he had better wordplay, rhyming and overall a better verse...it was entertaining to read and the rhyming was better overall...flowed nicely and on point so battle verse# 2 gets it...
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