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Old 07-28-04, 12:06 PM   #12
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Originally Posted by Dilettante
This nigga can't finish his name cuz he goin into seizure
My words take his soul like I'm da Grim Reeper.. 7/10
nothing special, average punch.. not really even a punch

Fake Emcee callin this a punline battle?
You mo hopeless then the plot of Sleepless in Seattle
7.5/10.. alright, but still not hittin hard

My lyrics screw you so much you look like a contortionist
For you to stop I insist, but you styl persist
So I bend ova for yo lips dat ain't never been kissed
And have you pucker like you drinkin a lemon pepsi twist
nice similie at the end. not much tho.. 8/10

Everyday a broken clock is right at least two times
But you a powered off electro dat been blanked from my rhymes

again, ok.. 7/10


Hotshh, I can't quote you so heres the breakdown..

You started off kinda, i don't know.. but everything else was more creative than his. also the rhyme scheme was much better. I liked how you rhymed with metaphore also.. so v/hotshh