best rappereva needs to practice, i dont want to bash you cause thats not the purpose of this site,the purpose is to elevate ya skills
thats what you need to focus
daillest came harder had wordplay, multi's, metas,
the structure towards the end was a little hard but shit happens
this is onesided, no hate,just honesty return your honesty here http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136172