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Old 07-28-04, 12:37 PM   #13
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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caliph..
thats verse was madd weak...terrible lines and structure..when ur
seeting ur verse up try to keep all lins the same size..it also makes ur verse flow much much better.overall....4.2/10...

myster E.
your verse wasnt great..halfway wack...strectched lines also horrid structure thats all around not good
bad flow..but ur punches hit harder...u won becuz of punches..u had the epper hand..
4.8/10...
my vote...
myster
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