hotshh I liked ya verse it was nice and compact which made the flow really easy to follow. You had some ok personals and good punches.

Mimesis your lines were majorly streeetttchhheddd and that made it hard for me to follow the flow. you really lost me at the end of your lines. some of it didnt make sense...although you put forth a decent effort. some ok punches, ok personals.

vote: hotshh.

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