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Old 07-28-04, 02:16 PM   #17
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IcePick:

Hey Homey--Any Foe opposing thee better be kissing their Rosary,
Cuz Lyrically anything under God aint Folding me///
decent start,

Facing Ice everyone knows there's no use of Competing,
I Got'cha own MIND asking "What Da hell Were You Thinking"///
this was ok,


Fuck ya wreckord bitch i got ya head spinnin you were murked from tyhe beginning

Bitch You Diss Me?? Ahhh... You too sweet, giving me a ToothAche,,
Creativity, wordplay, Drumil ya blue prints a fucking fake///
this was preety good

You dont believe in God..What?!?! You Saying ICE Dont Exist?
I'll remove ya Mouth and Throw ya Voice like a True Ventriloquist//
nice hit, good

Your Style drenched in Fear and Embedded into your Conscience,
Beating Me is Twisted like Nuns fucking In Convents//
lol nice ending...

all around a good verse... 8.0 outta 10

Durmil:

Amateur Stop! Ya Getin Dismanteled With Shots While Im Takin Ya Props
...Ice Pick The Word Is You Givin Out More Hand Jobs Then A Manicure Shop

haha nice good start....

The Rap Business Is Straight Hopeless, In The Industry You Won't Make It
....I'll Have Ya Body Pourin Out More Liquids Than A Generous Waitress
ha nice punch again ouch....

Look At Ya Basic Lines, Youll Never Shine....Goodluck Becomming A Vet
...Trying To Rhyme From the Heart? I'll Rip Out Your Torso & Spit In Ya Chest
preety good...

You Thinkin You Can Fuck Wit The BluePrint? Then Watch As I Nukka U Out
...Cuz If Ya Continue Spittin Pussy Your Gunna Find A Dick in Your Mouth
this was decent, the 1st line wasnt that good 2ed was decent..

Stupid Little Bitch! I Guess You Underestimated My Ability To Rip Kids
...Here's Some Free Advice: Work On Pickin Up Ya 'Game' Like 'G-Unit' Did!
ha good ending as-well....

vote: drumill he just hit harder and keep on bangg'in them back to back nicely done u'r preety sick with it.....