Aight this was a Ok battle, yah Both Need to elevate, I liked Both of your verses...
Mulit: N/A
Rhyems:X
Structure:X
Personals:Not really.. But I would say X if any
Flow: MatW
Meta's: X
WordPlay: X
Matw
Bro, you know how to Rhyem, yah just gotta take it to the Next Level Now, Read some shit on How to Elevate, or look at some Vets Battles.. too See how they Use Wordplay... No hat'n... Should have put more Effort into the Verse also.. seems like you didnt care...
Rated Verse: 3/10
XxXstacy
Not a Bad Verse, But were not Stupid in here, we can figure out what yah Spitting about, Anyway.. Tight Verse.. Gotta get Harder Punches in there.. Just keep working at it..
Rated Verse: 5/10
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