Voted For: Ice Pick

Battle Verse 1
structure isnt very consistent...flow fell off due to the lack of consistency...no multis...wordplay was simple...a few, at best, of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Battle Verse 2
structure is good...flow is on target...u had nice multis...pretty good wordplay...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good personals...Battle Verse 2 had the better structure...the more stable flow...more metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Battle Verse 2 gets my vote...

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against Kizza...thanx...