Voted For: Ice Pick

Battle Verse 1
structure isnt very good...most of ur lines r stretched...flow fell off a little due to the stretchness...u had pretty good multis...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Battle Verse 2
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure isnt good...ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchness...good multis...wordplay was alright...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had a good structure...neither had a good flow...neither had good personals...both had good multis...Battle Verse 1 had the better wordplay...as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Battle Verse 1 gets my vote...

VOTE - BATTLE VERSE 1

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