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Old 07-28-04, 06:48 PM   #9
Magic5
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Shit, wtf?...this ones all messed up....

C_R_E_A_M still gets my vote, but ill break it down more i guess...

C_R_E_A_M
structure is good...flow is on target...u had some multis...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

dysphoria
structure isnt very good...most of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchnes...u had some good multis...wordplay was good...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good presonals...both had some multis...both had good wordplay...C_R_E_A_M had the better structure...the more stable flow...and more connecting punches....so basing off of that...C_R_E_A_M gets my vote...

VOTE - C_R_E_A_M

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