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Old 07-28-04, 09:16 PM   #25
KroNuz
 
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Monsoon- First Part Of Ya Verse Was Wack... Wordplay Was Ok.. But I Wasnt Feeling It... And That Line About Off Beat... Its Text So It Doesnt Matter.... Other Than That.. Flow Was Good. Structure In Second Part Was Better Than Your First Part.. Punches Hit Here And There A Couple Decent Ones....

MArvolousj1900- Structure Was Better Than Monsoons, Flow Was Decent, Some Punches Were Played, And Some Connected Good, Wordplay Was Played In Some Parts But Was Still Ok....

Punches- Tie
Flow- Marv
Wordplay- Mon
Metaz- Marv
Multis- Mon
Structure- Marv
Originality- Tie

Final Vote---- Marvolousj1009
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