Voted For: Complex Illness

Battle Verse 1
What the fuck was that?....u had NO structure at all...u didnt have a flow at all, as i didnt know when ur lines were supposed to end...no multis...no wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Battle Verse 2
structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...wordplay is decent...some of ur punches connected...personals were pretty good...

Overall
neither had multis...Battle Verse 2 had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...Battle Verse 2 gets my vote...

VOTE - BATTLE VERSE 2

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136172