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Old 07-28-04, 09:25 PM   #12
For$akeN
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beware a harsh voter is in your midst...

Erangance's Drop:

dont be suprised when you read and yo eyes start to smoke
cause tha shit i spit is equivalent to a 1000 volts
self-glorification lines and that is pure whackness
not a very good thing at all to do seriously....0/10

no comparin yo flow to mine i deserve a 1000 votes
revoke no need to be provoked you a joke
blah.....1st line self-glorification and 2nd
was the joke 0/10

i had to spit first cause u would of probably choked
ya flow sound regurgatated mine the most anticipated
*newsflash* choked & anticipated do not
rhyme at all 2/10

deservin a standin ovation be patient u will soon be congradulatin
young e on a victory easy tookin u rap like u shookin
never face to face lookin u ll be cookin
weak not feelin' 0/10
u weak dont speak keep ya words in ya mouth
i dont feel ya shit like a kick from a mouse
what the fuck????????0/10


OVERALL: 0/10



Revoke's Drop:

your not on my level kid, your skills are going down a Bottomless pit
your a waksta so you can just quit with that thug shit
should of switched the lines around so
the set-up could of been better 6.5/10

its funny you think your ill you just caught the common cold
only way your catching attention is by puttin your verse in bold
haha I like it atleast but the 1st line is kinda
played a bit 6/10

im not even on my 6th line and you know your done
add a loss to your record, its common where your from
its ok not that good not special 5/10
your not worth writing a verse with any sick punches
name you Fragrance cuz your known to spray wackness in bunches
hhahhahaha funny 7/10
this battle is done must of swallowed your verse cuz you choked
and i left you without a chance and being the one who got revoked
okay 5/10

OVERALL: 6/10

VOTE: REVOKE
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