http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=135411
shadows no good at topical, look at all the d/r and swayed votes.
Shadow:
your rhythmatically repugnant and ur flow is off track....
just like ya crew it must be a fam thing blueprint is also wack....
just how DML merked u il give u a blast from the past....
and revoke only gassed you up so u think u got a chance...
quit rappin...take a hint even jesus tryin to give you a sign...
yes they predicted you but your skill dont match half of mine...
raps not ur thing..just like O'J's glove son...it just dont fit...
but you are an artist...... known for creating complete shit....
you winning? wouldnt happen try 2 wish uppon a shootin star....
post ur verse in a golf course and it still couldnt be up to par...
i dont have to punch hard son you couldnt take the blunt of it...
ur an easy win.. and im doing it just for the " pun" of it....
ill beat you like a hillbilly's spouse..trap and squash u like a mouse...
u call people wack..dont throw stones if u live in a glass house.....
u fooled me..i thought u were good but u aint. u think thats cold..?....
.......give up now and admit to ur crew how their leader.......
your vocab obviously tells us your a topic head, so why are you doin text? you lack the key componenst of a text battle, lines were streched like topicals, punches were no where to be found, no personals rele. garbage.
vango:
Let's get this battle started Shadow and commence with the realness
Even if your computer had a virus you wouldnt have Textual-Illness
I heard you were good at topical, wake up Shadow this is a battle
You couldn't even come original your like Shadows Edge's Shadow
This site needs to stop gassing you kid cuz you need no encouragement
Don't worry about anyone feeding your lyrics dont provide any nourishment
I've merked half your roster kid and yes that includes your Leader
Sent Limited Edition home crying and Revoked membersip from the cheater
The other half of your roster well they tried to get in my crew
Simply put we don't take rejects thats why your not wearing BLUE
Two leaders in your crew do you even really know whose in charge
This battles like your alias, Shadow you've been officially "Discharged"
you had nice structure, lines were a lil long...but great personals, no comedy but it was a good verse, you got this one.
favorite line:
I heard you were good at topical, wake up Shadow this is a battle
You couldn't even come original your like Shadows Edge's Shadow
let the topical heads stay topical, and let the text pros keep up wut their doin.
vote: vango