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Old 07-28-04, 10:03 PM   #7
Magic5
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Deliquint
structure is good...flow is on target...u had nice multis...wordplay was pretty good as well...some of ur punches connected...decent personals...

EXIT WOUNDS
structure is decent...all of ur lines r stretched though...flow fell off due to the stretchness...u had good multis...wordplay wasnt good...a few, at best, of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had good multis...Deliquint had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that....Deliquint gets my vote...

VOTE - DELIQUINT

Please return the favor with an honest vote on one of the links in my sig.

Thanx.