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Old 07-28-04, 10:24 PM   #8
Ca'lam
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hmm..

anxiety:i thought this was a good simples verse.. no wordplay, but personals were there.. flow was the same, but a little stretched..just tiny bit.. Overal pretty good...


~R~: hmm its dragged at the begginging.. it picked up a lil bit in the middle.. i thought this verse didnt do you justice compared to the others.. but its was definatly less stretched then i normally see you come.. flow was actually pretty good in this.. no personals.. some ok metas.. is say a decent average verse...


my vote gotta go to anxiety for making it more personal...
holla back if you need me to further explain or do a verse break down.. im kinda tired right now
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