ok:
708:you had a decent verse, a little short but you had punches and personals, flow was good too,structure is weird but i like it, but u just didnt come as hard as star...............
star:you had the better verse here, your vocab was better, flow was good too, i liked ya punches a lot, nice wording, liked the closer too, overall good job both..
VOTE:star

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