good battle one of the best i actually read on this site

anyways

anxiety u had some hard punches incorporated within ur verse
nice concepts and a few personals
ur font size is gay tho and i had to wear glasses for it
ur structure is decent but the quoting is quite gay

r-rated
u concepts of punches were alil better
some quotable lines but i wont get that in depth
ur personals were nice too
and ur color is gay

in the end i think r took this his punches were more direct and the structure was better

avoid the elipsises yall

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