Voted For: Myster.E

Battle Verse 1
structure isnt very good...all of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchness...u had nice multis...good wordplay...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Battle Verse 2
no structure at all...u didnt even seperate ur lines man...no flow, cause u didnt have a structure...no multis...no good wordplay...none of ur punches conected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good personals...Battle Verse 1 had the better structure...the more stable flow...more multis...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Battle Verse 1 gets my vote..

VOTE - BATTLE VERSE 1

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