Killah Poet
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure is good...flow is on target...u had some multis...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

DaDemorcrate
structure isnt very good...ur lines werent consistent length...flow fell off...no multis...wordplay was decent...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Killah Poet had the better structure...the more stable flow...and more multis...neither had good personals...DaDemorcrate had better wordplay...and more connecting punches...and considering punches and wordplay r more important in a battle then structure,flow, and multis...DaDemorcrate gets my vote...close battle though...

VOTE - DADEMORCRATE

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