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Old 07-29-04, 02:14 AM   #8
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Voted For: KroNuz

Well not bad this was a close battle, KroNuz you have the wordplay down as well as the muliti's you could work a little on developing your punches but somtimes good wordplay and multi's really enhances a punch which yours seemed to do, you started off kinda bad with the opening bar but as the verse progressed you got better, it seems to me you realy build on your previous barz which is good to see.

J trooper you were kinda like + / - meaning you had a good bar then one i wasn't feel'n then a good one then one I wasn't feel'n the opener was a nice hit then the second bar was kinda bunk so on and so forth. You as well have the multi's down it's good to see makes things a nice read cause it enhances your flow.


Now punches win battles and this in this one it was almost to close to say, both of you came creative I liked how Kro brought up the current event's with the site and all, and J you just had some well thought out punches. However, J your two barz

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These two bars didn't seem like much of a punch the first one I posted was more like 1 up'n and the second wasn't really anything. Because of that fact I have to say that Kro takes this, mainly because although J had some really sick punches they weren't consistent all the way through. Kro, your punches were average but consistent.
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