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Old 07-29-04, 02:20 AM   #14
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this battle was kinda close but it came down 2 who had the better punches the better structure and the best wordplay

Julien you had a nice verse but ya word play fell short you had good structure nice and short but you could of used better words 2 mold ya verse that would of made it alot more smoother 2 follow overall you had an ok drop

Roc you had a nice drop here 2 ya punches hit harder tho and you had better wordplay and complexity you put the right words in the right places and that made ya flow jus go smoothly easier to read and easier to follow, had some nice multi's

both of u didnt really have much personals so work on that

overall it was an ok battle ive seen better from you both but it came down to the punches and j ROC had better punches so he gets my vote
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