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ok this was an ok battle you both could have upped the anit a lil bit but o well ova now
Mac you had an ok drop you could of came a lil harder and had a better stucture it looked stretched and jus 2 damn short in certain spots so that made it hard 2 follow and hard 2 flow along with. you needed better wordplay and complexity you had punches but they were all played out and simple. you need 2 elevate
OOO had the overall better verse here harder punches and better wordplay good play with the words here in your verse even tho you got marked down cuz of ya structure made it hard 2 follow you should of took mac attacks structure and applied your lyrics 2 it, chop that shit down some and u will be aight.overall u had the better verse here with better wordplay and better complexity and not really any good personals from any of you but
OOO n stop had the better drop here
gets my vote
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