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Old 07-29-04, 02:32 AM   #5
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mmm k Thug you had punches and good struc but ya punches were played and came out wack its like u didnt come hard at all but u still had an ok verse but u were focused on 2 much self glorification and you had some personals but they really didnt connect eitheir you need 2 elevate some kid

Met ah 4 had some nice punches that connected but in my eye you got the win cuz of wordplay and complexity you had horrible structure it was kinda hard 2 even follow so u need 2 fix that shit but you had nice wordplay and an overall alright verse which got you the win in my book but change ya structure and chop that shit down some

both of you had an allright drop but it came down 2 wordplay and punches and Met ah 4 had the better punches and wordplay

gets my vote
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