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Old 07-29-04, 02:36 AM   #12
Magic5
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Voted For: Prolicx

Battle Verse 1
structure is good...flow is on target...tight multis...tight wordplay...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Battle Verse 2
structure is ok...some of ur lines are stretched though...flow fell off due to the stretchness...u had nice multis...good wordplay...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had good multis...both had good wordplay...neither had good personals...Battle Verse 1 had the better structure...the more stable flow...and more connecting punches...

Please return the favor with an honest vote on this battle-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136172

Thanx.