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Killah
you cant come on here rappin about guns and shit that shit is played out and its sumthin a newb would put. you had an ok verse wasent good and it wasent bad you could of used better wordplay and more complexity in ya verse and take out all that killer killer bang bang shit cuz that gets you no props on here~~~ elevate son
Demo
You had the overall better verse here had somewha good wordplay but you had a bad structure so work on that and you had some nice multi's they didnt hit that hard but they hit hard enough. you won this one cuz basically your comp stinked but you need 2 elevate some 2 but you had nice wordplay and nice punches so u got my vote
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