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Myster e you had some good punches but ya structure made it look horrible you need 2 elevate and use some better multis and personals ya punches hit kinda weak but mostly because of ya structure chop that shit down and elevate and you will be aight
Sik
you had some nice punches and they hit hard and connected you had nice structure and overall good flow nice complexity and wordplay i liked it alot keep that shit up overall sin gets my vote for better wordplay and complexity and overall harder punches
good shit ya
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