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Old 07-29-04, 02:46 AM   #17
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Anxiety's Drop:


R was up in the awards thread, only saying his own name like Pikachu...
But from the opinions other vets have, seems no one agrees with you...

- You should have maybe posted a link or somthing just so there is not confusion, just a suggestion this was a funny ass opener
8/10

Cant Impersonate the Impersonator? Restricted lately has been angry...
Since you failed to Impersonate, seems the impersonators Slim Shady...

-This had nice wordplay, but the punch seemed a little distant,
7/10

Your tellin people that saying you lost to DR votes is a whack excuse...
Refresh my memory, but isnt that what u said when you lost to looch...

This bar is a nice personal, and a consistent punch, nothing overly surprising just a straight up punch.
6.5/10

You were once considerd the best, no one here could take you down...
Now when people put u at the top, cant explain how sad that sounds...

-This was one of my favorite just cause it's a very creative personal,
8/10

Interesting how u offered to make a poll to get you out of phase one...
And after a few of our members bitched at you, you never made one...

This was a strong closer, and a deadly personal no question why I'm give'n this bar a
9/10

OVERALL: 38.5/50 This was a tight knit verse the personal's were hitting hard, you could tell there was some static getting brought to the surface.


Re$tricted's Drop:


Changed Ya Name..You're Signed In..But What You Trying To Prove?
Cause You Was Getting Disresepcted Back When I Was A Newb...

-Nice punch, this I thought started a little slow, you seemed to really build off each bar after this, I didn't see a lot of your creativity comming through on this bar,
7/10

This Dude Was Meant To Be Sonned Since Birth..Ya Mom Bothered and Wild..
I Would've Had My Child Aborted Before I Ever Fathered Your Style..

-Nice wordplay this really enhanced the punch, and creativty was there as well
7.5/10

By The Way You Ducking..It's Obvious You Need Protection..
Cause The Illest You Ever Got Was Coppin A Yeast Infection..

The first bar was kinda plain, and second finished the punch off, okay,, probably average,
7/10

Watch The Pixels Scream As I Make Your System Bleed Glitches..
I Hope Your Pussy's Trimmed And Clean..Cauase I Tend To Eat Bitches..

- I like the wordplay on this bar, it seemed to enhance the flow which as you are aware, tends to make the punch hit harder,
8/10

Your Bitten Pre-Write's Are Ripped With Vicious Heartlessness..
Sorry Kid but You're About As Live As Abortion Clinic Garbage Is..

-Damn, ya dont make it easy this was just as good as his finsher, when you come this fresh it's easy to see why ya get a 9 on this bar.

Let me add this up...

37.5/50

Damn, I hate it when they end up that close I think it makes the loss tougher to take, maybe it's just me but it's a pretty good example of just how close this battle was haven't seen the voting yet but I bet this one is gonna go down to the wire, it was just to close to call.


Vote removed.. both add up to 38.5
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