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Old 07-29-04, 02:51 AM   #24
~Luciano~
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ok this was a nice close battle i liked it alot nice shit ya
Da truth
u had a nice structure and nice complexity some nice multis and some okay punches they really were kinda simple you had good wordplay and jus a nice drop but you could of came harder with the punches and that would of helped you out alot

Unfor
you had a nice drop 2 good complexity but ya structure was kinda stretched and that fucked up the whole flow from flowing smoothly and easily you had nice wordplay i liked some of the vocab that you put in ya verse ya punches jus overall hit harder than ya comp so there for Unfor gets my vote due to better wordplay and overall better punches
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