Bomber-Z
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure is good...flow is target...no multis...no good wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Sin
structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...wordplay is decent...some of ur punches connected (Quotes r played though)...personals were decent...

Overall
both had a good structure...both had a good flow...neither had multis...Sin had the better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals..so basing off of that..Sin gets my vote...

VOTE - SIN

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