Arright on flow and structure I give this to Prolicx- he had that-- However Marvolous had crazy use of multies, and a couple of his lines had me rolling... You both used alot of wordplay in your verses, I liked both of em, but I hated Marvolous' closer-- I think in terms of punches Marvolous had the more humerous punches- both were strong though. Very close battle--- but

Vote - Prolicx for being more consistent - I think if Marv's closer was as ill as the rest of the verse I would be voting for him.

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